Spark

A few nights ago I wrote this poem, it is about my girlfriend and the way that I feel about her. I didn’t use proper grammar or puncuation throughout some parts, because in class I learned that you don’t have to follow all the rules. I originally decided to write it because most poetry didn’t make much sense to me and I was going to make fun of it by writing a few haiku’s about random things. To me poetry was something that a person wrote when they did to much acid and couldn’t figure out how to type/write there thoughts correctly. How wrong I was. I enjoyed writing what I think is a poem, I’m not sure about stanzas and things but I just wrote what I felt.

just a spark

lit my heart

into a fiery blaze.

with not but a kiss,

something amiss,

i was bliss.

she is sweet

the smell of a rose,

she is my heart my love my life

without her

i died. i died. i died.

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4 Responses to “Spark”

  1. andshewillbeapples Says:

    Simple, and really, really pretty.

  2. Tria Says:

    I am so happy to see you looking at the world of poetry in a new way, Andrew! Keep writing!

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