A few nights ago I wrote this poem, it is about my girlfriend and the way that I feel about her. I didn’t use proper grammar or puncuation throughout some parts, because in class I learned that you don’t have to follow all the rules. I originally decided to write it because most poetry didn’t make much sense to me and I was going to make fun of it by writing a few haiku’s about random things. To me poetry was something that a person wrote when they did to much acid and couldn’t figure out how to type/write there thoughts correctly. How wrong I was. I enjoyed writing what I think is a poem, I’m not sure about stanzas and things but I just wrote what I felt.
just a spark
lit my heart
into a fiery blaze.
with not but a kiss,
something amiss,
i was bliss.
she is sweet
the smell of a rose,
she is my heart my love my life
without her
i died. i died. i died.
September 5, 2009 at 10:49 AM |
Simple, and really, really pretty.
September 9, 2009 at 2:43 AM |
Thanks
September 7, 2009 at 4:32 PM |
I am so happy to see you looking at the world of poetry in a new way, Andrew! Keep writing!
September 9, 2009 at 2:43 AM |
I will